Should poorer countries develop their tourist industry when the basic needs of their people are not met?


I wrote this essay several years back when I was teaching General Paper in a JC. I had assigned my students the 2007 A Levels essay paper for a class practice under timed conditions (90 mins). I invited them to select a question for me and I wrote the essay in real-time alongside them. After the writing process, I typed out my manuscript as it is and shared it with the class. 

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This essay reflects a scaled-down version of essay 01A. It demonstrates a competent response expected of JC2 students at the A Levels. There is coherent argumentation, adequate usage of examples and clear communication of ideas in language usage. An essay like this would score in the mark range of 30-35 at the A Levels. 

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